Flash in the Pan

The sun beat down on his skin. It was too hot to keep on his clothes, but without them, everywhere the light touched burned.

Turning like a sundial to only expose one side at a time to the unrelenting orb, he tried to count the waves as they licked at the side of the raft. It only made him seasick.

He closed his eyes and pictured her face handing him the cruise tickets she’d won. “If she hadn’t drowned, I would have killed her.”

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Welcome to “Flash in the Pan”

Tonight’s Flash comes under the August upper limit of 100 by a mere 16. If you would like to join Flash in the Pan, this week’s word is “light”. Link back to this post with your “light” flashes to be featured on the Flash in the Pan page due out at the end of this month.


Have you ever been given something which turned out to be something you should have turned down? Is anything really ever free? What is the best free thing you have ever gotten? Have you ever given a disastrous free thing to someone else?

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  1. I need a Flash in the pan for dummies L( How exactly does one “join in”?
    Tcub recently posted..HomelessMy Profile

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    • Instructions are here. Word limits are listed in the posts with the words. Grab a word, write a flash, link back to the post with the flash (If on blogspot, send me a link via email.), and get linked to the FTP page. Simple. πŸ™‚

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  2. ALL I GOTTA SAY is
    SENSUAL
    i am not even going to begin to try and write flash fiction tonight Mademoiselle Rouge !!!!!!!!!!!!

    I am sending you some HAPPY TENSION AND LOVE AND MUSIC AND GOOD NIGHT VIBES
    XXX
    i will Flash fiction with a song πŸ™‚ lol
    “AMBER ” by 311 xo
    love and more love xo
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SUFSB2plwzM
    To a wonderful week ahead πŸ™‚ xo
    Cat Forsley recently posted..Sundays are 4 xx Cat Forsley Β©My Profile

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    • I hope you have a fabulous week! I know this one is going to be another fun one. Oodles of plans and lots of fun things to do! The happy tension continues πŸ™‚ Lots of love and {HUGZ} xxx Great song!

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      • HUGGGGZ DELUXE πŸ™‚
        i Just tweeted u some more love
        sexy lyrics huh ….Yuppppp Yupppp Yuppppppppp
        Good Vibe in that song – i will learn flash fiction one day ……:) right now the happy tension is uPPPPPPPPPP and me happy Cat and all is Good …. i don’t have to do everything all at once – gotta remember that !!!!!!!!!!!!! Please be my reminder πŸ™‚ lol xo
        Love You Rouge xo
        and Hope You are getting less spammy spam
        – i got like 10 ten today ……..
        that’s a good day ! LOL πŸ™‚
        Love to You and all ur fam xo
        Your Chat xo
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  3. Laurie

     /  August 12, 2012

    OK so blog spot, include a link back here and send you a link to the post? What if I find time alone and get to do all of them so far? can I do that? I’ll read the instructions again.

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    • Of course you can. Just link each one to the post where the word originally appeared. You can do all of them. I will be putting up some advance words and the dates when they will go live. If you find time, you can even get ahead πŸ˜‰

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  4. Sorry to be boring, but I’ve never been given anything that bit me and I have not given out anything that bites!!! πŸ™‚

    Love and hugs!

    Prenin.
    prenin recently posted..Saturday – a new chapter.My Profile

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  5. Sometimes you get something that is more trouble than it’s worth, but of course you don’t realize that until it’s too late.
    Binky recently posted..Life of Fun and GamesMy Profile

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  6. Red I just love this Flash in the pan stories….
    for free,never ,never got anything for free,and have learned the tough way that when the mind and entire body says no to some offer,listen to your mind…
    twice went for trips which turned into nightmares of sorts…never again i promised my self and have kept the promise so far..
    oh man this story just reminded me of those two trips..one of them was a rail accident..it was real bad.
    Soma Mukherjee recently posted..when in dream don’t meow,woof or say that thingMy Profile

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    • Oh, how dreadful, Soma. I have been travelling for ages. Occasionally, I do get to travel for “free”. It always means some portion of the trip is free, but you always end up paying for it in the end. Perhaps, staying home is best for you. Please tell me you were not on the train? <3

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  7. Free means there is a catch to it…a price to pay somewhere.

    Hi Red, I see you have been writing up a storm lately. Don’t see how I could get caught up at this point, but I know all of them are brilliant!…You shine!
    Hugs a plenty! xoxo
    Deb recently posted..Shoreline StrollMy Profile

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    • You are right. I have always found somewhere the piper must be paid when something is “free”. Not to worry so about getting caught up. Just pick up anywhere πŸ˜‰ It is why I leave links, so if you have a few, you can see where else we have been. Otherwise, ever forward! So glad to see you today! <3 xxx

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  8. –The greatest writers can write “Less” words and say so much “More.”

    This is YOU, Red. <3 Xx
    My Inner Chick recently posted..12 More Very Cool ThingsMy Profile

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    • Great to see you today, Kim! I have been having fun with the Flash. It is not my strong suit, as I am horrifically verbose πŸ˜‰ <3 xxx

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  9. I don’t suppose I could just repeat ‘light’ over and over again?
    I won a stuffed ‘Monsters of the Gridiron’ football, once. That was pretty sweet.
    πŸ™‚
    spilledinkguy recently posted..FrogMy Profile

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    • Well, hello, stranger!! So great to see you today…but no. I like prizes! Did you win one with the team picture or holographics on it? Or did you win the regulation ball with the team logo?

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  10. I love your post! It made me thinking:)

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