Egress into the daylight was painful. Tears flowed freely.
How long have I been buried?
Welcome to “Flash in the Pan”
September’s word limit is 150, and this flash comes in at a tenth: 15 words. The word egress is today’s feature.
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Binky
/ September 5, 2013If you’re a Vampire, daylight would not be comforting.
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Gray Dawster
/ September 7, 2013You’re right about that Binky 🙁
Andro
Red of M3
/ September 9, 2013And depending on the version of the legend, more than mildly inflammatory.
Susan Shuman
/ September 6, 2013Wow! These few words pack a big punch. Nice job, Red! Btw, I like the new header. 🙂
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Red of M3
/ September 9, 2013*grins* Didn’t Lizzie do a magnificent job on it? I think this is one of my fave flashes this quarter. xxx
Valentine Logar
/ September 6, 2013Okay you have done it again! Burial could be any number of things though. I am asking myself this question even as I type this.
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Red of M3
/ September 9, 2013*grins* I am convinced this one is my favorite. Shortest, but favorite. xxx
El Guapo
/ September 6, 2013My reaction to daylight is strictly situationally dependent.
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Red of M3
/ September 9, 2013Mine, too. Mostly bad.
Tess Kann
/ September 6, 2013Well that packed a punch! Holy Moly. I’m thinking all kinds of scenarios. Awesome.
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Red of M3
/ September 9, 2013*grins* I am astounded at some of the responses to this little number. xxx
Gray Dawster
/ September 7, 2013Buried alive springs to mind here, but like Val has already mentioned, there could be lots of different angles to this one 🙂
Flashing is fun is it not? 😉
Andro xxxx
Gray Dawster
/ September 7, 2013There is a Be missing somewhere,
and who added the Have? Hmm 🙁 lol
Andro xxxx
Gray Dawster
/ September 8, 2013Thank You Red 😉
Andro xxxx
Red of M3
/ September 9, 2013Thank the fairies. 🙂
Red of M3
/ September 9, 2013*whistles innocently*
Red of M3
/ September 9, 2013Absostinkinglootly. 😉
Gray Dawster
/ September 12, 2013Yah ’tis gut 🙂 lol
I know, I have a lousy
German accent when
writing 🙂 lmao
Andro xxx
Tony McGurk
/ September 7, 2013Sounds like a Zombie wrote this one. 15 word stroy. That’s a tough challenge
Red of M3
/ September 9, 2013Oh, good twist, Tony! I love a good challenge.