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Flash in the Pan

As long as the noise aroused no suspicion, he could get away with it.

Flash in the Pan

“Just blow in the tube, ma’am.” The deputy was certain she was intoxicated. This would be his eighth arrest this week.

Hot Flash

Chris was energized. The smell. The feel of tingling muscles. The sweat. “Was it good for you?” he asked with a sated grin.

Flash in the Pan

A chill was in the air. He sniffed the breeze. It wasn’t going to rain, but if the temperature kept dropping, those grey clouds would erupt with snow he could ill afford.

Fictitious Innuendo

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We got over the angst of figuring out when the story was overly explicative or hopelessly futile. Where exactly is the line between extraneous details and effective character development?